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Too many (mixed?) metaphors. Simplify?

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On second reading, I definitely agree. Ironically, this post about soap bars could use some cleaning up! Maybe drop the vitamin pill analogy and simplify the rest a bit.

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Monkey holding on to peanut in a jar such that his fist is what keeps him trapped!

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:D There are just too many good ones of these haha.

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